Walking City OCT Audition: Tom and Kas page 20

Why would she "have to admit" when she already said last page that she was doing that because it was too tempting??? It comes off really annoying because what was written on this page was heavily implied last page. And the "have to admit" lines get so annoying in anime and comics in general so I recommend not using it.

As for the tanuki's swearing, it makes the impression of a joke, not sure if you intended for that. Both of these factors combined make the scene feel a lot less serious.